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The Apple family were swamped with ponies clamoring to buy the cider they had spent the past hour making. They wouldn't notice if she slipped away, no one would in this sea of ponies.
Twilight focused a picture of the, what had they called it? Super Speedy Cider Squeezy, in her mind and teleported. She found herself on the side of the road, next to a small cafe, several miles outside of Ponyville. Her eyes immediately picked out the bright red and white mane of one of the brothers.
"Hey!" she called out. The stallion turned around, it was the one without the mustache.
"We're leaving," he replied, "No need for any more trouble." He looked anxious.
"I don't want trouble, I want answers," said Twilight standing her ground.
"And what answers would those be little filly?" asked Flim.
"You're machine. I've never seen anything like it. How does it work? The mix of machinery and magic is amazing!"
A look of surprise crossed the stallion's face, then he smiled. "Well that's a lot of technical talk my dear, how about I explain it over a cup of sparkling cider?"
Twilight walked closer, one cup couldn't hurt, plus she'd get the answers to the questions that had buzzing around her brain ever since the brothers had arrived. "Alright," she said joined him for a cup of cider…
Okay so this is my idea of how Energy Spark [link] was created. Yeah I know its all highly unlikely, but tough luck I love the two of them! And Flam is inside the diner trying to sell the owner cider or something XD.
The awesome Title Cover was made for me by an awesome friend and artist ~Cartuneslover16 Go and watch her epicness!

Prologue: Here!
Chapter 1: [link]
Chapter 2: [link]
Chapter 3: [link]
Chapter 4: [link]
Chapter 5:[link]
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Talar93 Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2013
One of best fanficks I've read.
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leogal Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
OHMYGODYES!!!!! ahem...Superb work darling, I shall proceed to watch you :thumbsup:
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Crazypurplebat Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012
:D Thanks! Enjoy reading it!
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leogal Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I've gotten through the first 3 chapters and I'm head over heels!!! God at this rate I'm never gonna be ready for my party tonight lol! It is THAT AWESOME!!!
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Crazypurplebat Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012
Well I'm so glad you like it, its my baby really and I loved writing it.
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leogal Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It. Is. Incredible!!!!I loved it so much! I can see this happening in the actual show! Ok, maybe that's a stretch, but definitely in my minds eye!!!
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Crazypurplebat Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012
Lol yes, if it wasn't a little kids show it could totally happen! Or at least I hope it would XD
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:iconleogal:
leogal Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I feel the need to animate this...too bad I'm not an animator yet...
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:iconcrazypurplebat:
Crazypurplebat Featured By Owner Dec 31, 2012
That would be really cool! Maybe one day!
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RunawayComics Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
could you include the rest of the chapter links?
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:iconcrazypurplebat:
Crazypurplebat Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012
Um I don't really have them all on hand, but they should all be in my gallery
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RunawayComics Featured By Owner Jul 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
i was just asking cuz its easier to just favorite the first chapter and have the leaks to the rest.
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:iconcrazypurplebat:
Crazypurplebat Featured By Owner Jul 5, 2012
Sorry, I should probably put up something like that!
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Pinkcatstar Featured By Owner Jun 28, 2012
oh never mind
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SecretProdigyHeart Featured By Owner May 23, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
You know, I'm gonna be writing a crossover called "Love Bonds" soon, it's about Applejack and Flim.

After the Flim Flam brothers leave, Flim, starts to think about a very Applejack, and goes back to Ponyville with two things to do;

Apoligize to the Apple Family and Ponyville, and get to know AJ more.

And I mean a whole lot more.
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:iconcrazypurplebat:
Crazypurplebat Featured By Owner May 25, 2012
Sweet sounds like a good story! Good Luck with that!
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SecretProdigyHeart Featured By Owner May 25, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Thanks I'lllet you know when the chapter is up.
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Orjanruusu Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
D'aawh, I love this! :)
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:iconcrazypurplebat:
Crazypurplebat Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2012
Thank you! I should be uploading a new chapter either today or tomorrow!
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Orjanruusu Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yayz! :iconflimplz:
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invaderzimfan234 Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
:iconrainbowdashlaughplz: i like it....

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:iconcrazypurplebat:
Crazypurplebat Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2012
Lol thank you!
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invaderzimfan234 Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
you're welcome!
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TruthSender Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2012
Nice!
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Crazypurplebat Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2012
Thanks :)
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TruthSender Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2012
Well this is my first Flim/Flam(ah don`t know who is who xP)xTwi story so I hope it will be rallt good :)
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Crazypurplebat Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2012
Yeah Flam is the one with the mustache and flim is the other brother! :)
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TruthSender Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2012
Twi was taking and drinking with flim(no moustache) and flam made Rarity faint xP
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Crazypurplebat Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2012
Yeppa
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TruthSender Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2012
:iconkermityayplz:
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shadowknuxgirl Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2012
Pretty good so far! Can't wait to see more!
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Crazypurplebat Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2012
Thank you! I love hearing feedback from my readers!
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TheFireWolfAuthor Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2012
This is so interesting keep it coming
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Crazypurplebat Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2012
Thanks I'm glad you like it! I should be uploading the next chapter within a day or so. (depending on how much homework I get, maybe later today)
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TheFireWolfAuthor Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2012
Yeah I do like it...but you do need to add length to your chapters
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Crazypurplebat Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2012
Yeah I'm working on that XD I haven't done fanfiction in forever and I'm still a bit rusty at it Sorry!
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TheFireWolfAuthor Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2012
It's ok
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LovelyNeko-MeE0w Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2012  Student General Artist
OMG why is this not longer??
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Crazypurplebat Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2012
:) Glad you like it! And don't worry I'm working on the next chapter right now :D
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Microstar245 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2012
....please
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:iconcrazypurplebat:
Crazypurplebat Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2012
Lol, I glad you liked it. I had originally planned this as a one-shot, but after the response I've gotten, I may just have to extend it!
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Microstar245 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2012
Please do! *patiently waits for more*
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Microstar245 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2012
MOAR
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Colors789 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Rigby: OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH SNAP MORDECAI IS GONNA GET JEALOUS
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Crazypurplebat Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2012
:)
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Colors789 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
lol
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Mn27 Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
"How does it work? The mix of machinery and magic is amazing!" That's exactly what I thought when watching the episode, is it the first time in this season? Magic can be used as powers/technical, hm? Can unicorns charge my iPod with their magic? :lol: Maybe unicorns learn some certain magic that are important to them, some that they don't need to learn;like teleportation[in my headcanon that one's hard to learn] and some that they obligated to, like Telekinesis
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Crazypurplebat Featured By Owner Feb 22, 2012
Yeah, hadn't really thought about it in detail or anything, just thought that was a good reason for her to go after him ;)
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Cartuneslover16 Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2012
I'm REALLY glad you love the picture. And I'm REALLY happy you posted the first chapter of this story. :hug:

Submit this to some of the clubs I submit my work to! And don't worry about my :iconmordetwi: club, there's a folder for fanfiction...and for 'Heartbreakers and Competition', that way more people's work get noticed. Like yours. ;)

Can't wait for the next chapter! And have a good night. :)
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Crazypurplebat Featured By Owner Feb 21, 2012
Aww thanks so much! I'll definitely submit this to a few more clubs...and work on the next chapter too!
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