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The Apple family were swamped with ponies clamoring to buy the cider they had spent the past hour making. They wouldn't notice if she slipped away, no one would in this sea of ponies.
Twilight focused a picture of the, what had they called it? Super Speedy Cider Squeezy, in her mind and teleported. She found herself on the side of the road, next to a small cafe, several miles outside of Ponyville. Her eyes immediately picked out the bright red and white mane of one of the brothers.
"Hey!" she called out. The stallion turned around, it was the one without the mustache.
"We're leaving," he replied, "No need for any more trouble." He looked anxious.
"I don't want trouble, I want answers," said Twilight standing her ground.
"And what answers would those be little filly?" asked Flim.
"You're machine. I've never seen anything like it. How does it work? The mix of machinery and magic is amazing!"
A look of surprise crossed the stallion's face, then he smiled. "Well that's a lot of technical talk my dear, how about I explain it over a cup of sparkling cider?"
Twilight walked closer, one cup couldn't hurt, plus she'd get the answers to the questions that had buzzing around her brain ever since the brothers had arrived. "Alright," she said joined him for a cup of cider…
Okay so this is my idea of how Energy Spark [link] was created. Yeah I know its all highly unlikely, but tough luck I love the two of them! And Flam is inside the diner trying to sell the owner cider or something XD.
The awesome Title Cover was made for me by an awesome friend and artist ~Cartuneslover16 Go and watch her epicness!

Prologue: Here!
Chapter 1: [link]
Chapter 2: [link]
Chapter 3: [link]
Chapter 4: [link]
Chapter 5:[link]
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:icontalar93:
One of best fanficks I've read.
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leogal Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
OHMYGODYES!!!!! ahem...Superb work darling, I shall proceed to watch you :thumbsup:
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:iconcrazypurplebat:
:D Thanks! Enjoy reading it!
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leogal Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I've gotten through the first 3 chapters and I'm head over heels!!! God at this rate I'm never gonna be ready for my party tonight lol! It is THAT AWESOME!!!
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:iconcrazypurplebat:
Well I'm so glad you like it, its my baby really and I loved writing it.
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leogal Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
It. Is. Incredible!!!!I loved it so much! I can see this happening in the actual show! Ok, maybe that's a stretch, but definitely in my minds eye!!!
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:iconcrazypurplebat:
Lol yes, if it wasn't a little kids show it could totally happen! Or at least I hope it would XD
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leogal Dec 31, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I feel the need to animate this...too bad I'm not an animator yet...
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:iconcrazypurplebat:
That would be really cool! Maybe one day!
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RunawayComics Jul 4, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
could you include the rest of the chapter links?
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